From: Andreas Neiser Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2013 09:56:27 +0000 (+0100) Subject: Somewhat improved cover letter X-Git-Url: https://jspc29.x-matter.uni-frankfurt.de/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=a7fb93e3538ff0ba9ef27eacee8c47555c7aa6c1;p=publication.git Somewhat improved cover letter --- diff --git a/2013-twepp-neiser-trb3_applications/revision/coverletter.txt b/2013-twepp-neiser-trb3_applications/revision/coverletter.txt index ec15434..dd534f4 100644 --- a/2013-twepp-neiser-trb3_applications/revision/coverletter.txt +++ b/2013-twepp-neiser-trb3_applications/revision/coverletter.txt @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@ -We are grateful to the referee for the helpful comments and -suggestions concerning our first draft. We have addressed each -mentioned point in our revised draft as follows (the order of the -points corresponds to the order of the referee report): +Dear Editor, -- We extended section 5 regarding the connection to the TRB3 platform. - We improved the figures belonging to section 6 clarifying the - results of the measurement. This should enable people without a HEP - background to understand the experiment better. The authors are - still convinced that these sections show the applicability of the - platform in "real-life" environments, which is an important feature - of a DAQ system, and hence are not superfluous. +we thank the referee for his constructive comments on our draft. We +have modified the draft accordingly; please find a summary of the +changes below (the order of the points corresponds to the order of the +referee report): + +- Sections 5 and 6 show that the TRB3 platform can be used in + large-scale applications under experiment-like conditions, + demonstrating an essential feature of a new DAQ platform. We have + expanded both sections to emphasise this point even more and to make + them more accessible to readers without a HEP background. - We increased the size of figure 1b as much as possible and added a short description in the corresponding section 3.1.